The Language of Poetry
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What I Learned
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What I Didn’t
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What I Learned |
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Elements
of Poetry
Directions: Using the
Reader’s Handbook, find the definitions and examples and write them on the
chart
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Element |
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Stanza |
a group of lines in a poem set off by
blank lines. Usually develops one
idea. |
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Sound Devices |
Make poetry interesting to hear read out loud |
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Alliteration |
The repetition of the same consonant sound at the
beginnings of several words of a line of poetry -creates music |
Soft rains and the smell of the ground, and swallows
calling with the shimmering sound. |
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Onomatopoeia |
The use of words that sound like the noises they
describe -adds fun and power to words |
Splishes, sploshes,
sloshes, |
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Repetition |
The use of any element of language-a sound, word,
phrase, or sentence-more than once. -Emphasizes meaning |
As of some one gently rapping, rapping at my chamber
door. |
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Rhyme |
Repetition of similar sounds either at the end of
line (End Rhyme) or
within a line (Internal Rhyme) -Adds musical quality |
But somewhere when some owls do not-t Perhaps they cry Which-h, Why-y or What-t |
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Rhyme Scheme |
A repeated regular pattern of rhymes usually found
at the ends of lines in a poem. |
Bear a Care a Ravenous b Cavernous b You c You c |
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Figurative Language |
Tools that a poet uses to create a special effect or
feeling |
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Symbol |
Something that stands for something else |
Eagle-freedom Heart-love Crown-power |
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Exaggeration |
The obvious stretching of the truth |
Small as a peanut Big as a giant |
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Idiom |
A common phrase made up of words that can’t be
understood by their literal, or ordinary, meanings |
-Swallow your pride -Do you need a hand -Ants in your pants |
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Metaphor |
A direct comparison between two unlike things. See something in a new way |
The fog comes on little cat feet. |
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Simile |
A comparison between two unlike things using the
words like or as |
The willow is LIKE an etching Fine-lined against the sky |
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Personification |
Poets give an animal, object, or idea human
qualities |
Summer grass aches and whispers |
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Imagery |
Language that appeals to the five senses |
Sight, sound, smell, taste, touch examples |
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Allusion |
A reference to something with which the reader is
likely to be familiar, such as a person place, or event from history. |
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Mood |
The feeling created in the reader by a poem or
story. |
Dreary, weak, weary-scary mysterious feeling |
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Tone |
The attitude the writer takes toward the audience,
subject, or character VOICE-speaker in the poem |
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Free Verse |
Poetry without regular rhyme scheme, meter, or form. |
“April Rain Song” by Langston Hughes has no rhymes
or regular rhythm |
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Lyric Poem |
A short poem that directly expresses the poet’s
thoughts and emotions in a musical way |
“So deep in luve an I, And I will luve thee
still, my dear.” |
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Narrative Poem |
A poem that tells a story; includes a plot |
“Lucinda Matlock” is a story of a woman’s life, from
childhood to death. |
Elements
of Poetry Search
Directions: Using the poetry books located at the front
of the room, locate examples of the following poetry
elements:
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Alliteration |
Symbol |
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Onomatopoeia |
Exaggeration |
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Repetition |
Idiom |
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Rhyme |
Metaphor |
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Rhyme Scheme |
Simile |
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Imagery |
Personification |
Complete
the following sheet by writing your examples on it:
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Poetry Book Title: |
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Group Members: |
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Poetry Element |
Example |
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Alliteration |
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Onomatopoeia |
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Repetition |
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Rhyme |
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Imagery |
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Symbol |
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Exaggeration/ Hyperbole |
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Metaphor |
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Simile |
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Personification |
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Figurative
Language
Example 1:
Her hair stood straight up like
spikes. Her eyes were saucers, rimmed in
black liner and blue eye shadow. Large
headphones covered her ears. All the
while I watched from across the waiting room, her head bobbed up and down as an
ocean liner on waves. The extra-large
T-shirt swallowed her, and those shoes were boats.
Example 2:
He
watches from his mountain walls,
And
like a thunderbolt he falls.
From “The Eagle” by Alfred, Lord Tennyson
Example 3:
All the world’s a stage
And
all the men and women merely players;
They
have their exits and their entraces;
And
one man in his time plays many parts…
From “As You Like It” by William Shakespeare
Example 4:
Where
the cold breezes come not, blooms alone
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little wind-flower, whose just opened eye
Is
blue as the spring heaven it gazes at…
From “A Winter Piece” by William Cullen Bryant
Example 5:
According to legend, Paul Bunyan arrived
on the banks of the
The above selections contain various examples of
Figurative Language such as similes, metaphors, personification, exaggeration/hyperbole.
Let’s see if you can find them all by completing the chart below.
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Type of F.L. |
Example # |
Text Line or Explanation |
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simile |
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Her hair
stood up like spikes Head bobbed
like an ocean liner on waves |
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Personification |
1 |
T-shirt
swallowed her |
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Metaphor |
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Her eyes
were saucers Her shoes
were boats |
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Simile |
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Like a
thunderbolt he falls |
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Metaphor |
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All the
world’s a stage Men and
women merely players |
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Simile |
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The
little wind-flower is as blue as the spring heaven |
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exaggeration |
5 |
137 bunks
piled one on top of the other crew used
parachutes to get down in the morning |
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Complete
on your own Literary Response and Analysis Practice 22 and Identifying the Words and Meanings of Metaphors and
Similes below.
Directions: Circle the
metaphor or simile in each sentence. In the chart provided, write the meaning
of the simile or metaphor based on the context of the sentence.
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The baby was like
an octopus, grabbing at all the wrapped presents from under the tree.
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What extra meaning or
visual is added by including this figurative language? |
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It makes me
visualize a baby that is quickly trying to grab everything around him b/c he
is so excited. |
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As the teacher
entered the room she muttered under her breath, “Two days before winter break,
this class is like a three ring circus!”
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What extra meaning or
visual is added by including this figurative language? |
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This simile
gets across the idea that the class is really rowdy, loud, and many things
are going on a one time. |
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The reindeers’
foot steps were thunder as they made their way across my roof.
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What extra meaning or
visual is added by including this figurative language? |
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Because I know
that thunder is loud and booming, it gives me the idea of the kind of noise
the reindeer are making. |
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The pillow was a
cloud when I put my head in it after waking up early on Christmas morning.
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What extra meaning or
visual is added by including this figurative language? |
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After a long
tiring day the writer was expressing what a comfortable relief it was to lay
her head on something very, very soft.
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I felt like a
limp dishrag after all the holiday festivities.
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What extra meaning or
visual is added by including this figurative language? |
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This simile
gets across the idea that the writer simply can’t even move b/c she is sooooo tired. |
Close
Modeling
Activity
BEFORE READING STRATEGIES
Set a Purpose
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What is the poem saying? |
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What meaning do I find in the poem? |
Winter Poem by Nikki
Giovanni
once a snowflake fell
on my brow and I loved
it so much and I kissed
it and it was happy and called
its cousins
and brothers and a web
of snow engulfed me then
i reached to love them all
and I squeezed them and they
became
a spring rain and I stood
perfectly
still and was a flower
Preview
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The title and name of the poet |
Winter Poem/Nikki Giovanni |
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The structure and overall shape of the poem on the page |
One Stanza/No capitalization |
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Any rhymes and where they occur |
No rhyme |
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Any words or names that are repeated or that stand out |
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Keywords in the first and last lines |
Snowflake/flower |
Close Reading Plan
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First READ FOR ENJOYMENT -Read Slowly -Reader’s feelings are important part of
the reading experience |
Second READ FOR MEANING -Write down important words (words
that give you a strong feeling or describe what’s happening) -Figurative Language (write down
similes, metaphors, personification, symbols, etc.) -Imagery (write down any words that
create a strong image) HOW DO ALL THESE
ADD TO OVERALL MEANING? |
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Third READ FOR SOUND AND
STRUCTURE -How many stanzas? -Is there a shape? -Sound Devices (Write down
alliteration, repetition, onomatopoeia, rhyme, rhyme scheme) HOW DO ALL THESE
ADD TO OVERALL MEANING? |
Fourth READ FOR FEELING -What is the mood? -What is the tone? |
Double Entry Journal
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-Effective way of responding to a poem when close reading |
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Left side: Lines from the poem |
Right Side: Reactions/interpretations/feelings about these lines |
DURING READING STRATEGY: CLOSE
First
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Parts of Poem You Like |
Reason |
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“it was happy and called
its cousins” “I reached to love them
all” |
Make me think of a snowfall
as one big family I feel that way when it
snows for the first time. |
Second
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Important Words/Figurative
Language/Imagery Examples |
What do they mean? |
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-Metaphor-I was a flower -Personification-the
snowflakes had a family -Metaphor-Web of snow -Instead of saying melted
she said they turned into a spring rain. -Other important
words: loved, kissed, engulfed |
All of these show how much
fun she is having in the snow, how much she loves snowflakes, and how she
feels apart of nature. |
Third
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Organization and Examples
of Sound Devices from the poem |
How do they add to the
meaning? |
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No capital letters No punctuation One stanza No rhyme or rhythm No Sound Devices |
This structure makes it
sound like a excited child it talking. |
Fourth
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Words from poem that create
mood/tone |
How does this poem make you
feel? How do you think the poet
feels? |
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-Reached out to love them
all -I loved it -I kissed it -I…was a flower |
Mood: After reading this, I really want it to
snow. Tone: Her writing makes it sound like she’s been
waiting and waiting for it to snow.
Now that is snowing she is so excited and revels in it. |
AFTER
Notes on Paraphrasing
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-Translate what the author
says into your own words. |
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-Put it in your own
style***Make it sound like you |
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-Helps you better
understand the poem if you can put it in your own words. |
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Directions: Complete the
paraphrasing chart below for a key line in the poem. Then use the information in the chart to
answer the BCR.
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Poetry Line |
My Paraphrase |
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“…i stood perfectly still and was a flower” |
I am a flower enjoying the rain. |
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My Thoughts |
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The poet uses this metaphor to show that she is just like a
flower. She is Enjoying the snowfall like a flower enjoys the rain. |
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BCR Question: Paraphrase the
poem “Winter Poem”
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I am enjoying this snowfall soo
much. |
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It started off slowly than all of a sudden I was surrounded
by a curtain |
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Of falling snow. |
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As they landed on me they melted |
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I am a flower enjoying the rain. |
Sketch: Draw a picture
on the back to go along with the poem.
Write about your picture and show how it connects to the poem.
Close
Whole
Class Activity
The Swimmer’s Chant
By Carol D. Spelius
Stroke. Stroke.
Time that turn.
Stroke. Stroke
Eyes
burn.
Save strength
For last length
Tired body
keep that beat
Don’t dare
Think defeat
Ace this race
Win this meet.
Stroke. Stroke.
Arms are dead
But he’s ahead.
Go, legs, go.
Fly, arms, fly.
Pull. Pull.
Try, don’t die.
Let him cry.
Stroke. Stroke.
Burn
that turn.
Lean. Clean.
Fast
last lap.
Stroke. Stroke.
Swim to win.
Mean it. Breath it.
GO FOR BROKE!
Stroke! Stroke!
The race is
over. The race is done.
The team screams,
“We’ve won! We’ve won!”
I’d like to shout and
jump about
But I’m…..all…..tuckered…..out.
DURING READING STRATEGY: CLOSE
First
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Parts of Poem You Like |
Reason |
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Second
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Important Words/Figurative
Language/Imagery Examples |
What do they mean? |
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Important Words: Stroke, fly,
pull, burn, win Figurative Lang: none Imagery: Arms burn Tired body Screams “We’ve
won, We’ve won” Stroke, Stroke But he’s ahead Burn that turn Fast last lap |
Give an image
of the swimmer in the pool. Trying to
focus & motivate himself to avoid giving into
exhaustion. Feel Fell Hear See See See See This is not an
easy race. It’s a struggle to win |
Third
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Organization and Examples
of Sound Devices from the poem |
How do they add to the meaning? |
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Rhyme: Regular Rhyme and Rhythm except for last
stanza Repetition: Stroke Stroke Organization: One long, thin stanza Very short
lines except for last stanza Last line: But
I’m…..all…..tuckered…..out. |
The first
stanza gives the impression of a swimming pool with its shape. The short
lines, rhyme, and rhythm reflect the breathing and pace of a swimming race. Similar to chanting or matches the timing
of his strokes The last line
is set up to show how tired the swimmer is at the end. |
Fourth
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Words from poem that create
mood/tone |
How does this poem make you
feel? How do you think the poet
feels? |
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The repetition
of “Stroke, Stroke” The fact that
he was behind Words like
burn, die, pull, and fly, fast, win, ace this race, don’t die |
Tone: Determination. The swimmer definitely wants to win Mood: Nervous,Anxious, Excited.
The reader is not sure if the swimmer is going to win. |
AFTER
BCR Question: Paraphrase the
poem “Swimmer’s Chant”
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Okay, here we go. |
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Dive, swim, move those arms and legs |
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Swim hard, swim fast |
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I can do it; don’t give in; won’t give up |
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I am strong and invincible |
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My arms ache, my legs burn, my lungs are going
to explode |
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Keep going; don’t let him win |
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Almost to the finish line. |
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Did I win? |
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You’ve won! My legs give out….Ahhh |
Sketch: Draw a picture
on the back to go along with the poem.
Write about your picture and show how it connects to the poem.
Close
Culminating
Project
Close Reading Teams
-Read poem
-Analyze poem by following Close Reading
-Paraphrase
-Read the poem as the class follows along in the book
-Summarize your close reading analysis. Make sure to cover the findings from each reading section
-Share your paraphrased poem and sketch
-Answer questions
Poems:
The Last Wolf
Old Snake pg 188 Bridges
Phizzog pg 285 Bridges
I Never Said I Wasn’t Difficult pg 282 Bridges
City pg 57 Bridges
Words pg 423 RH
Those Winter Sundays pg 431 RH
To You pg 203 Language
Close
Directions:
Complete the Close Reading Strategy for the following poem:
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page ________ in ______________________
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1. Preview
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The title and name of the poet |
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The structure and overall shape of the poem on the page |
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Any rhymes and where they occur |
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Any words or names that are repeated or that stand out |
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Keywords in the first and last lines |
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4. Read for Enjoyment
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Parts of Poem You Like |
Reason |
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Important Words, Figurative Lang, Imagery |
What do they mean? |
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Important Words: Figurative Lang: Imagery: |
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6. Read for Structure and Sound
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Organization and Examples of Sound Devices from the poem |
How do they add to the meaning? |
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Structure: Rhyme: Sound Devices: (Alliteration, Repetition, Onomatopoeia
etc.) |
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Read for Mood and Tone
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Words from poem that create mood/tone |
Describe how these words make you feel |
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Mood (Reader’s Feelings): Tone (Author’s Attitude): |
Brief Constructed
Response
Paraphrase your poem based on the meaning gained from Close Reading. REMEMBER PARAPHRASING IS CAPTURING WHAT IS BEING SAID BUT PUTTING IT IN YOUR OWN WORDS AND STYLE.
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Poem Analysis Grading Sheet
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Close Reading Process
10 points Accurately followed the steps in the close
reading process and as a result gained a complex understanding of the poem/
9 points Followed the steps in the close
reading process and as a result gained a general understanding of the poem.
8 points Somewhat followed the steps in the
close reading process and as a result
gained a general understanding of the poem.
5 points Did not follow the steps in the close
reading process and as a result did not have an understanding of the poem.
Paraphrasing
10 points Reveals a complex understanding of the
poem
9 points
Reveals a general understanding of the poem
7 points
Reveals an incomplete understanding of the poem
4 points
Reveals little to no understanding of the poem
Illustration
5 points Reveals a complex understanding of the
messages within the poem
4 points Reveals a general understanding of the
messages within the poem
2 points Reveals a poor understanding of the
messages within the poem
1 point
Reveals no understanding of the messages within
the poem
Presentation
5 points Very Prepared and practiced
4 points
Somewhat prepared and practiced
2 points
Not prepared or practiced
Total points earned __________ out
of 30 total points = __________ %
Study Guide
Poetry Test
-Poetry Matching
definitions and examples;
Elements: Identifying sound elements and
figurative language
Explaining the meaning of similes
Locating examples in poetry books and explaining
Study packet
-Close
General Information
Fill in the blanks and multiple choice
Study
worksheets
-Analyzing Poem: You
will be read three poems and answer multiple choice questions related to
meaning, structure, and poetry elements.
-Paraphrasing: You
will be given 1 poem to analyze using close reading and then show your
understanding by paraphrasing.