The Language of Poetry

 

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Elements of Poetry

Directions:  Using the Reader’s Handbook, find the definitions and examples and write them on the chart

Element

Definition

Example

Stanza

a group of lines in a poem set off by blank lines.  Usually develops one idea.

 

Sound Devices

Make poetry interesting to hear read out loud

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  Alliteration

The repetition of the same consonant sound at the beginnings of several words of a line of poetry

-creates music

Soft rains and the smell of the ground, and swallows calling with the shimmering sound.

  Onomatopoeia

The use of words that sound like the noises they describe

-adds fun and power to words

Splishes, sploshes, sloshes,

  Repetition

The use of any element of language-a sound, word, phrase, or sentence-more than once.

-Emphasizes meaning

As of some one gently rapping, rapping at my chamber door.

  Rhyme

Repetition of similar sounds either at the end of line (End Rhyme) or within a line (Internal Rhyme)

-Adds musical quality

But somewhere when some owls do not-t

Perhaps they  cry Which-h, Why-y or What-t

  Rhyme Scheme

A repeated regular pattern of rhymes usually found at the ends of lines in a poem.

Bear    a

Care    a

Ravenous  b

Cavernous b

You  c

You  c

Figurative Language

Tools that a poet uses to create a special effect or feeling

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    Symbol

Something that stands for something else

Eagle-freedom

Heart-love

Crown-power

    Exaggeration

The obvious stretching of the truth

Small as a peanut

Big as a giant

    Idiom

A common phrase made up of words that can’t be understood by their literal, or ordinary, meanings

-Swallow your pride

-Do you need a hand

-Ants in your pants

    Metaphor

A direct comparison between two unlike things.  See something in a new way

The fog comes on little cat feet.

    Simile

A comparison between two unlike things using the words like or as

The willow is LIKE an etching

Fine-lined against the sky

   Personification

Poets give an animal, object, or idea human qualities

Summer grass aches and whispers

Imagery

Language that appeals to the five senses

Sight, sound, smell, taste, touch examples

Allusion

A reference to something with which the reader is likely to be familiar, such as a person place, or event from history.

Alice” makes references to the character Alice from Alice in Wonderland

Mood

The feeling created in the reader by a poem or story.

Dreary, weak, weary-scary mysterious feeling

Tone

The attitude the writer takes toward the audience, subject, or character

VOICE-speaker in the poem

 

Free Verse

Poetry without regular rhyme scheme, meter, or form.

“April Rain Song” by Langston Hughes has no rhymes or regular rhythm

Lyric Poem

A short poem that directly expresses the poet’s thoughts and emotions in a musical way

“So deep in luve an I,

And I will luve thee still, my dear.”

Narrative Poem

A poem that tells a story; includes a plot

“Lucinda Matlock” is a story of a woman’s life, from childhood to death.

 

Elements of Poetry Search

Directions:  Using the poetry books located at the front of the room, locate examples of the following poetry elements:

       

Alliteration

Symbol

Onomatopoeia

Exaggeration

Repetition

Idiom

Rhyme

Metaphor

Rhyme Scheme

Simile

Imagery

 

Personification

 

Complete the following sheet by writing your examples on it:

Poetry Book Title:                                   

Group Members:

 

Poetry Element

Example

 

Alliteration

 

 

Onomatopoeia

 

 

Repetition

 

 

Rhyme

 

 

Rhyme Scheme

 

 

Imagery

 

 

Symbol

 

Exaggeration/

Hyperbole

 

 

Idiom

 

 

Metaphor

 

 

Simile

 

 

Personification

 

Figurative Language

 

Example 1:

        Her hair stood straight up like spikes.  Her eyes were saucers, rimmed in black liner and blue eye shadow.  Large headphones covered her ears.  All the while I watched from across the waiting room, her head bobbed up and down as an ocean liner on waves.  The extra-large T-shirt swallowed her, and those shoes were boats.

 

Example 2:

He watches from his mountain walls,

And like a thunderbolt he falls.

                                        From “The Eagle” by Alfred, Lord Tennyson

Example 3:

All the world’s a stage

And all the men and women merely players;

They have their exits and their entraces;

And one man in his time plays many parts…

                                        From “As You Like It” by William Shakespeare

 

Example 4:

Where the cold breezes come not, blooms alone

The little wind-flower, whose just opened eye

Is blue as the spring heaven it gazes at…

                                        From “A Winter Piece” by William Cullen Bryant

Example 5:

        According to legend, Paul Bunyan arrived on the banks of the Red River and put together a very large logging crew.  The bunkhouse was said to have 137 bunks piled one on top of the other.  The crew used parachutes to get down in the morning.

 

The above selections contain various examples of Figurative Language such as similes, metaphors, personification, exaggeration/hyperbole.  Let’s see if you can find them all by completing the chart below.

 

Type of F.L.

Example #

Text Line or Explanation

simile

1

Her hair stood up like spikes

Head bobbed like an ocean liner on waves

 

Personification

1

T-shirt swallowed her

Metaphor

1

Her eyes were saucers

Her shoes were boats

Simile

2

Like a thunderbolt he falls

Metaphor

3

All the world’s a stage

Men and women merely players

Simile

4

The little wind-flower is as blue as the spring heaven

exaggeration

5

137 bunks piled one on top of the other

crew used parachutes to get down in the morning

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Complete on your own Literary Response and Analysis Practice 22 and Identifying the Words and Meanings of Metaphors and Similes below.

 

 

Directions:  Circle the metaphor or simile in each sentence. In the chart provided, write the meaning of the simile or metaphor based on the context of the sentence.

 

1.      The baby was like an octopus, grabbing at all the wrapped presents from under the tree.

What extra meaning or visual is added by including this figurative language?

It makes me visualize a baby that is quickly trying to grab everything around him b/c he is so excited.

 

2.      As the teacher entered the room she muttered under her breath, “Two days before winter break, this class is like a three ring circus!”

What extra meaning or visual is added by including this figurative language?

This simile gets across the idea that the class is really rowdy, loud, and many things are going on a one time. 

 

3.      The reindeers’ foot steps were thunder as they made their way across my roof.

What extra meaning or visual is added by including this figurative language?

Because I know that thunder is loud and booming, it gives me the idea of the kind of noise the reindeer are making.

 

4.      The pillow was a cloud when I put my head in it after waking up early on Christmas morning.

What extra meaning or visual is added by including this figurative language?

After a long tiring day the writer was expressing what a comfortable relief it was to lay her head on something very, very soft. 

 

5.      I felt like a limp dishrag after all the holiday festivities.

What extra meaning or visual is added by including this figurative language?

This simile gets across the idea that the writer simply can’t even move b/c she is sooooo tired.

 

 

Close Reading of Poetry

Modeling Activity

 

BEFORE READING STRATEGIES

Set a Purpose

What is the poem saying?

What meaning do I find in the poem?

 

Winter Poem by Nikki Giovanni

once a snowflake fell

on my brow and I loved

it so much and I kissed

it and it was happy and called its cousins

and brothers and a web

of snow engulfed me then

i reached to love them all

and I squeezed them and they became

a spring rain and I stood perfectly

still and was a flower

Preview

The title and name of the poet

Winter Poem/Nikki Giovanni

 

The structure and overall shape of the poem on the page

One Stanza/No capitalization

 

Any rhymes and where they occur

No rhyme

 

Any words or names that are repeated or that stand out

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Keywords in the first and last lines

Snowflake/flower

 

 

Close Reading Plan

First Reading

 

READ FOR ENJOYMENT

-Read Slowly

-Reader’s feelings are important part of the reading experience

 

Second Reading

 

READ FOR MEANING

-Write down important words (words that give you a strong feeling or describe what’s happening)

-Figurative Language (write down similes, metaphors, personification, symbols, etc.)

-Imagery (write down any words that create a strong image)

HOW DO ALL THESE ADD TO OVERALL MEANING?

 

Third Reading

 

READ FOR SOUND AND STRUCTURE

-How many stanzas?

-Is there a shape?

-Sound Devices (Write down alliteration, repetition, onomatopoeia, rhyme, rhyme scheme)

HOW DO ALL THESE ADD TO OVERALL MEANING?

 

Fourth Reading

 

READ FOR FEELING

-What is the mood?

-What is the tone?

 

Double Entry Journal

-Effective way of responding to a poem when close reading

Left side:  Lines from the poem

Right Side: Reactions/interpretations/feelings about these lines

 

 

DURING READING STRATEGY: CLOSE READING and DOUBLE ENTRY JOURNAL

 

First Reading for Enjoyment

 

Parts of Poem You Like

Reason

“it was happy and called its cousins”

 

“I reached to love them all”

 

 

Make me think of a snowfall as one big family

I feel that way when it snows for the first time.

 

 

Second Reading for Meaning

 

Important Words/Figurative Language/Imagery Examples

What do they mean?

-Metaphor-I was a flower

-Personification-the snowflakes had a family

-Metaphor-Web of snow

 

-Instead of saying melted she said they turned into a spring rain.

 

-Other important words:  loved, kissed, engulfed

All of these show how much fun she is having in the snow, how much she loves snowflakes, and how she feels apart of nature.

 

 

 

Third Reading for Structure Sounds

 

Organization and Examples of Sound Devices from the poem

How do they add to the meaning?

No capital letters

No punctuation

One stanza

No rhyme or rhythm

No Sound Devices

This structure makes it sound like a excited child it talking.

 

Fourth Reading for Feeling

 

Words from poem that create mood/tone

How does this poem make you feel?

How do you think the poet feels?

-Reached out to love them all

-I loved it

-I kissed it

-I…was a flower

Mood:  After reading this, I really want it to snow. 

Tone:  Her writing makes it sound like she’s been waiting and waiting for it to snow.  Now that is snowing she is so excited and revels in it.

AFTER READING STRATEGIES:  PARAPHRASING AND SKETCHING

 

Notes on Paraphrasing

 

-Translate what the author says into your own words.

 

-Put it in your own style***Make it sound like you

 

-Helps you better understand the poem if you can put it in your own words.

 

 

 

 

 

Directions:  Complete the paraphrasing chart below for a key line in the poem.  Then use the information in the chart to answer the BCR.

 

Poetry Line

My Paraphrase

“…i stood perfectly still and was a flower”

 

 

I am a flower enjoying the rain.

My Thoughts

 

The poet uses this metaphor to show that she is just like a flower.  She is

Enjoying the snowfall like a flower enjoys the rain.

 

 

 

 

 

BCR Question:  Paraphrase the poem “Winter Poem”

 

I am enjoying this snowfall soo much.

It started off slowly than all of a sudden I was surrounded by a curtain

Of falling snow.

As they landed on me they melted

I am a flower enjoying the rain.

 

Sketch:  Draw a picture on the back to go along with the poem.  Write about your picture and show how it connects to the poem.

 

 

Close Reading of Poetry

Whole Class Activity

 

 

The Swimmer’s Chant

By Carol D. Spelius

 

Stroke. Stroke.

Time that turn.

Stroke. Stroke

Eyes burn.

Save strength

For last length

Tired body

keep that beat

Don’t dare

Think defeat

Ace this race

Win this meet.

Stroke. Stroke.

Arms are dead

But he’s ahead.

Go, legs, go.

Fly, arms, fly.

Pull. Pull.

Try, don’t die.

Let him cry.

Stroke. Stroke.

Burn that turn.

Lean. Clean.

Fast last lap.

Stroke. Stroke.

Swim to win.

Mean it. Breath it.

GO FOR BROKE!

Stroke! Stroke!

 

The race is over.  The race is done.

The team screams, “We’ve won! We’ve won!”

I’d like to shout and jump about

But I’m…..all…..tuckered…..out.

 

 

DURING READING STRATEGY: CLOSE READING and DOUBLE ENTRY JOURNAL

 

First Reading for Enjoyment

 

Parts of Poem You Like

Reason

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Second Reading for Meaning

 

Important Words/Figurative Language/Imagery Examples

What do they mean?

Important Words:

Stroke, fly, pull, burn, win

 

 

Figurative Lang:

none

 

Imagery:

Arms burn

Tired body

Screams “We’ve won, We’ve won”

Stroke, Stroke

But he’s ahead

Burn that turn

Fast last lap

 

Give an image of the swimmer in the pool.  Trying to focus & motivate himself to avoid giving into exhaustion.

 

 

 

Feel

Fell

Hear

See

See

See

See

This is not an easy race.  It’s a struggle to win

Third Reading for Structure Sounds

 

Organization and Examples of Sound Devices from the poem

How do they add to the meaning?

Rhyme:  Regular Rhyme and Rhythm except for last stanza

 

Repetition:  Stroke Stroke

 

Organization:  One long, thin stanza

Very short lines except for last stanza

 

Last line:

But I’m…..all…..tuckered…..out.

 

The first stanza gives the impression of a swimming pool with its shape. 

 

The short lines, rhyme, and rhythm reflect the breathing and pace of a swimming race.  Similar to chanting or matches the timing of his strokes

 

The last line is set up to show how tired the swimmer is at the end.

 

Fourth Reading for Feeling

 

Words from poem that create mood/tone

How does this poem make you feel?

How do you think the poet feels?

The repetition of “Stroke, Stroke”

The fact that he was behind

Words like burn, die, pull, and fly, fast, win, ace this race, don’t die

 

 

Tone:  Determination.  The swimmer definitely wants to win

Mood:  Nervous,Anxious, Excited.  The reader is not sure if the swimmer is going to win.

 

 

 

AFTER READING STRATEGIES:  PARAPHRASING AND SKETCHING

 

BCR Question:  Paraphrase the poem “Swimmer’s Chant”

 

Okay, here we go.

Dive, swim, move those arms and legs

Swim hard, swim fast

I can do it; don’t give in; won’t give up

I am strong and invincible

My arms ache, my legs burn, my lungs are going to explode

Keep going; don’t let him win

Almost to the finish line.

Did I win?

You’ve won! My legs give out….Ahhh

 

 

Sketch:  Draw a picture on the back to go along with the poem.  Write about your picture and show how it connects to the poem.

 

 

Close Reading of Poetry

Culminating Project

 

Close Reading Teams

  1. You will be assigned a poem to Close Read and respond to
  2. Choose a badge to wear.  During your chosen section you will be the poem reader and recorder.
  3. You may use the reading packet as a reference
  4. All members are required to participate in the analysis of the poem

-Read poem

-Analyze poem by following Close Reading

-Paraphrase

  1. You will present your poem as a team to the class.  In the presentation you must:

-Read the poem as the class follows along in the book

-Summarize your close reading analysis.  Make sure to cover the findings from each reading section

-Share your paraphrased poem and sketch

-Answer questions

           

Poems:

The Last Wolf

Old Snake pg 188 Bridges

Phizzog pg 285 Bridges

I Never Said I Wasn’t Difficult pg 282 Bridges

City pg 57 Bridges

Words pg 423 RH

Those Winter Sundays pg 431 RH

To You pg 203 Language

 

Close Reading of Selected Poems

Directions:  Complete the Close Reading Strategy for the following poem:

 

_____________________________ on page ________ in ______________________

 

Team Members

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1.  Preview

The title and name of the poet

 

 

The structure and overall shape of the poem on the page

 

 

 

Any rhymes and where they occur

 

 

 

Any words or names that are repeated or that stand out

 

 

 

Keywords in the first and last lines

 

 

 

 

 

         4.  Read for Enjoyment

Parts of Poem You Like

Reason

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

            5.  Reading for Meaning

Important Words, Figurative Lang, Imagery

What do they mean?

Important Words:

 

 

 

Figurative Lang:

 

 

 

Imagery:

 

 

 

 

 

 

6.  Read for Structure and Sound

Organization and Examples of Sound Devices from the poem

How do they add to the meaning?

Structure:

 

 

Rhyme:

 

 

 

Sound Devices: (Alliteration, Repetition, Onomatopoeia etc.)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

            7.  Read for Mood and Tone

Words from poem that create mood/tone

Describe how these words make you feel

 

 

 

 

 

 

Mood (Reader’s Feelings):

 

 

Tone (Author’s Attitude):

 

Brief Constructed Response

Paraphrase your poem based on the meaning gained from Close Reading.  REMEMBER PARAPHRASING IS CAPTURING WHAT IS BEING SAID BUT PUTTING IT IN YOUR OWN WORDS AND STYLE.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Poem Analysis Grading Sheet

Team Members

 

 

 

 

 

 

Close Reading Process

10 points  Accurately followed the steps in the close reading process and as a result gained a complex understanding of the poem/

9  points  Followed the steps in the close reading process and as a result gained a general understanding of the poem.

8 points  Somewhat followed the steps in the close reading process  and as a result gained a general understanding of the poem.

5 points  Did not follow the steps in the close reading process and as a result did not have an understanding of the poem.

Paraphrasing

10 points  Reveals a complex understanding of the poem

 9 points   Reveals a general understanding of the poem

 7 points   Reveals an incomplete understanding of the poem

 4 points   Reveals little to no understanding of the poem

Illustration

 5 points  Reveals a complex understanding of the messages within the poem

 4 points  Reveals a general understanding of the messages within the poem

 2 points  Reveals a poor understanding of the messages within the poem

 1 point    Reveals no understanding of the messages within the poem

Presentation

 5 points  Very Prepared and practiced

 4 points   Somewhat prepared and practiced

 2 points   Not prepared or practiced

 

Total points earned  __________ out of 30 total points = __________ %

 

 

Study Guide

Poetry Test

 

-Poetry       Matching definitions and examples;

 Elements: Identifying sound elements and figurative language

Explaining the meaning of similes

Locating examples in poetry books and explaining

Study packet

 

-Close Reading and Paraphrasing: 

General Information

Fill in the blanks and multiple choice

Study worksheets

 

-Analyzing Poem:         You will be read three poems and answer multiple choice questions related to meaning, structure, and poetry elements.

                            

-Paraphrasing:     You will be given 1 poem to analyze using close reading and then show your understanding by paraphrasing.